Thursday, October 1, 2015

6 for 6: By Lorenzo Bautista

The following are six short, six word stories.

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He saw the leash, and cried.
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He awoke, looked outside, and gasped.
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After the last strum, they clapped.
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One more step, and it's over.
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But on the inside, he knew.
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All that mattered, was her smile.


5 comments:

  1. I remember you telling me the first one in class, very deep, way to start your stories.

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  2. The dog, right? Dogs must hate leashes....;)

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    1. I interpreted as a former dog owner who looked at their old dog's leash and cried from the memories.

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  3. I really love the last one, especially how it can be interpreted into so many different forms of love.

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  4. your last three are my favorites. the last one gives me the sense of a romantic love story that had some dark turns. awesome job with these stories.

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